Song (Re)Cycle: Of Fury III
(Originally posted Aug. 27, 2004; re-posted on July 24, 2006 and July 22, 2014, edited)
That day we didn't
Lose our teeth;
You did.
But you don't feel the pain yet;
It only starts when we're gone.
1 comment:
Short, new, fresh, and witty, like a lively kitten.
It has a juvenile quality to it, but this playfulness adds life to it and fits such a subject reminiscent of childhood and its problems.
It is strongly redundant, though, seen in the light of "Vomit".
Ton frère Ahmad
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