Thursday, October 02, 2003

Vomit

it’s funny how
you can get used to
the rhythm of the vomit
until it lulls you
into a most silent apathy

today i took the day off
to watch my cat
throw his life up
but instead
he threw mine

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Too crude, not bad, but too crude. The idea of vomit having a rhythm is a delicate mulahatha, but other than that it is informal and too crude.

Ton frère Ahmad